Layouts and feedback

Today we were testing possible layouts and critiquing them

 Basic layout

I used just a photo from the internet

Critique:

-Bring into centre more
-Change up type, try a few variations
-Turn off hyphenation
-Make heading more playful
-Have subheadings or bold text to lead eye into the body of the text
-Title too similar/ too close to text, try two or three columns
-Text area is too crowded, too hard to read the black text on the dark back ground
-Have more cave wetas dotted around

Initially tried to draw the cave on white paper - way too light, not enough impact, doesn't create the right atmosphere.